For this weekend’s Trifextra Challenge, we were instructed to write 33 words about a beast in an unusual place. As it’s nearly Hallowe’en, I decided to write this one for you. Why? Because flash-fiction horror is fun! Here’s “Seeing is Believing.”
“Mom! Can you come look at my eye?”
“What for?”
“It feels weird.”
“Did your brother poke you again?”
“No, Mom. Just come look.”
“Coming. Now, what THE HELL IS IN YOUR EYE?!”
The Swords of the Ancients 
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Sounds as if the eye has taken on a life of its own. Cool!
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the follow as well.
I love that we don’t know what she’s seeing–sometimes the imagination is better than any description! Nice job.
I love stories about the unseen. 😀 Thank you!
I love the suspenseful cliff hanger!
I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thank you.
How very frightening!
Thank you very much!
🙂
Ouch..
😀 Thanks, Björn!
That’s not something you want to hear! Freaky.
I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!
Is it a beast? Tell me it’s not a beast. Yikes!
It MAY be a beast… 😉 No guarantees.