This week’s Trifextra Challenge was a fun variation on the usual. We had 33 words for our entry, and were instructed to include a palindrome (either a single word, or a palindromic phrase). I found one that I’ve included at the end of my piece.
“Revolt”
Kisses will be given, not stolen. Stories will be shared, and dreams realized. Wounds will heal with the passage of time, and we’ll gaze with amazement at our progress. Won’t lovers revolt now?
The Swords of the Ancients 
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great use of the 33 words
and great last line
Ally :
@allyatherton
Thanks Ally!
What a great 33 🙂 Love it!
I’m glad! Thanks for reading. 🙂
I enjoyed this whole post. Well done! Thanks for this and, for all great stories you have told during your time with Trifecta. I have always loved the name of your blog, btw. Good luck in your future days beyond Trifecta. 🙂
Thank you! I’m going to miss the Trifecta challenges, but I’m very grateful to have connected with the community of writers they brought together.
This is powerful, yet also quite sweet. Great balance and great writing. 🙂
Thank you very much.
Hahaha Makes peace, love and understanding sound so boring!
😀 I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Love this, especially:
“Kisses will be given, not stolen.”
Thank you! It’s my favorite line in there. 😀
This was a great read!
I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading today.
Nicely done! Good palindrome!
Thank you. Picked it out of a list, and thought it worked well for the challenge.
As Morrison once chanted: “some are born to sweet delight, some are born to the endless night.” This piece has an excellent palindrome, and powerful message. I’m just too much of a cynic to take it 🙂 Nice work! “kisses will be given, not stolen” so hopeful, and elegant.
Thank you very much!
Fabulous 33! Quite a powerful idea. Thanks for linking up.
Thank you! I look forward to the last few challenges too.